Showing posts with label Armada. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Armada. Show all posts

Tuesday, March 26, 2019

The Conclusion of PfL and My Reading of Armada

Happy Spring, everyone!

Although... it still feels like winter here. There's bursts of nice, warm-ish weather, but it gets cut through by wicked-cold winds. As I'm writing this post, I'm huddled under a fleece blanket, a thick flannel one, and my.... well, I don't know if it's an official Snuggie, but it's a blanket with sleeves....

It would be reeeeeeaaaaaally nice if spring legit showed up sometime soon. I hate being cold all the time.

A comic book artist I follow - Linda Luksic Sejic - started up a side-project-that-is-soon-becoming-an-actual-comic-series called Punderworld a few months back. It's her take on the Greek myths centered around Hades and Persephone. With that mindset, she thinks she figured out why it's still cold all over the world, even though the northern hemisphere is SUPPOSED to be warming up.
I love that smug look on Hades' face. These two are adorable
when interpreted as actually having a mutual love between them.
Okay, so I tried to behave and not repost the picture, but Tumblr decided it wanted to be difficult and not let me share it properly. I tried embedding it, but then I lost the next few paragraphs of my blog post.... so I have to do it this way.

Anyway, Linda is awesome, and you should both support her and check out her work. So, here are her links: Sigeel's Tumblr and her DeviantArt account. She's working on creating a Patreon to fund turning Punderworld into a legit comic book series, so feel free to take a peek at that as well.

I need to check my own finances, but I'm hoping to at least become a $1 tier backer, or something along those lines. It may not be much, but at least I know I'm supporting an artist I enjoy for a work I LOVE.

Anyway, back to me!

As per usual for me lately, "life got in the way," and my chapters for "Prescription for Love" were delayed. Instead of an "every three days" schedule, I was on more of an "every four, five, maybe six days" schedule.

At least I still updated once - usually twice - a week.

Anyway, last Tuesday, I went to go see "Captain Marvel" with Skarabrae-stone, which meant I wasn't home to finish the 8th chapter of PfL. Why didn't I finish it between publishing last week's blog post and going to the movie?

Honestly? I don't remember. I have no clue what I did with my day, and I again slacked off with my time audits. Do we now know WHY I have to do them? If I keep wasting my days and forgetting what it is I even did? I need the calendar as much for accountability as I do for my pathetic memory.
Knives from the Scott Pilgrim comic books
by Bryan Lee O'Malley
Wednesday was generally a wash since I had work, then zumba, and then Hubby and I have TV shows we watch. I did get the chapter up just before midnight on Wednesday though. Close enough, right?

"Prescription for Love: Chapter 8"
On FanFiction            On ArchiveOfOurOwn            On DeviantArt

The story was technically up on the 20th, and so I was aiming to have the 9th and final chapter up 3 days later: on Saturday the 23rd. That didn't happen either.

I was distracted at work on Thursday, and after was the first official "Omnibladestrike Thursday Visits" meet-up. He has a new job, and it means he's not really available on weekends anymore. Over the past couple years, we've tried to have a weekly meet-up with him where we could watch some bizarre anime or play games together. It was originally on Sundays since I get out of work at 4, and it would give us the most time to hang out. Then football started up, so we shifted to post-6pm on Saturdays.

But Omni doesn't have weekends any longer, and we don't want to lose our weekly meet-ups, so we're trying for Thursday Evenings now. He really wants to get back into little "writing meet-ups" were we can pow-wow and discuss our WIPs; really help him brainstorm so he stays excited about his project. We also don't want to give up on our anime-watching since we have about four different series going. Omni has a character attached to our Switch version of Diablo III, so we HAVE to find time to still run around and kill demons... Plus, there's tons of board games Hubby wants to try out with Omni, and more games where Omni is part of a Legacy campaign.

So my Thursday nights are pretty booked up, and we'll probably cram as much in as possible until Omni feels like he has to drive home before he passes out.

Needless to say, I didn't do any writing on Thursday. Did a bunch of reading though. I'll get to that later.

Friday I had off, and could have easily worked on my chapter. However, it was a rare Friday that Hubby was also off, so it turned into Clean The Apartment day. I would rotate between cleaning for an hour or two and relaxing for an hour, that way I wouldn't feel overwhelmed.

One hour was for food and hanging out with Hubby, but most of those "relaxation" hours were used sprawled out on my bed reading. My lower back was really cramping up, and it helped to just sprawl.

Wolfhearted showed up that evening, and we watched the latest episode of ML. I loved it. Wolf was "meh" about it. Mainly because it was a good old "mind wipe" episode.



For those of you who didn't click, just know that I loved the episode, so after Wolfhearted left, I spent the next FOUR HOURS flipping through Tumblr for posts on this episode. Now, keep in mind that the episode came out on Monday, the 18th. I had waited five days to watch it. So that was roughly a week's worth of posts I've been avoiding so I wouldn't see spoilers. I didn't even go into the episode tag. I just scrolled through the people I follow.

There were about 12 or 13 people who had posted ML content in reference to the episode. Most were quick gif sets, short reactions, or fanart. Simple to see the post and move on.

IT.  STILL.  KEPT.  ME.  FOUR.  HOURS!!!!

A lot of people also enjoyed the episode it seems. From a fanfic writer's perspective, I loved it because it showed me so many new facets of Adrien's and Marinette's personalities, along with Tikki and Plagg. I found out more about the world ML takes place in. It showed me possibilities. It will be a great episode to go back to for reference material.

Anyway, that was my Friday night.... so no working on PfL. That is, until I went to bed. To try to calm my mind and lull myself to sleep, I mentally tell myself a story. It helps my mind focus on one insignificant thing until it can turn off.

To make up for my slacking, and knowing that I wanted to post the next chapter by Saturday, I started mentally working out how to conclude my story... and then I drifted off to sleep.

Saturday I figuratively cracked my knuckles and focused on the story. I was doing fairly decently. I had the chapter written by about 10pm that day. I just couldn't stay focused enough to edit. Especially since Disney channel was airing "Moana." I really enjoy this movie, and that climactic scene between Moana and Te Kā? Gives me chills EVERY time I see it.

If you haven't watched Moana, I advise that you don't watch the below clip until you do, because you don't want to ruin the impact of the ending. However, if you HAVE watched it before, just re-watch the song "Know Who You Are" and tell me you don't get chills!


I just wish I could have found a clip that started a weeeee bit sooner so you also had that single flute intro and walk down to the ocean. That's the part that really gives me chills. And the line "they have stolen the heart from inside you" is so powerful I'm tearing up again just writing it out.

UGH! I just wish Frozen hadn't overpowered this movie. Moana is so underrated. The music is fantastic, the visuals are stunning, the comedy is great, and there is NO romantic love interest in the whole movie, for anyone.

Anyway, I'm going on a tangent here. My point is that Moana is amazing, and even the less-than-amazing scenes, like with Tamatoa, still give us fantastic cover songs....


I really enjoy this man's covers, and, honestly, I think this version sounds more on-brand with Lin-Manuel Miranda than the actual movie version. He also did this nice cover of "How Far I'll Go."
Yeah, just... go check out more from Jonathan Young. He has something for just about everyone. Have fun.


Sooooo, yeah, that was Saturday. I knew I should have focused. I knew I wanted to post that day. I knew I COULD post that day if I focused. I watched a movie and snuggled a husband instead....

Whoops....

SUNDAY! Sunday at work I could just do the edits. That's it. Easy. I could post the chapter around 4pm after I got home. I'd still be late, but it wouldn't be all that bad. I mean, I was almost two days late for the previous chapter. I had this!

Until I didn't.

I'm not sure why, but as I was unpacking my netbook at work so I could work on those edits, I also pulled out my red notebook I keep my Miraculous Ladybug notes in. I decided to update my notes in the back of the book. I keep a running list of akumatized supervillains and their motivation while akumatized. Things like Zombizou wanted to spread "love" like a zombie virus, or Dark Owl wanted to get rid of LB and CN so he was the only superhero for Paris, or Simon Says wanted to hypnotize Gabriel in order to humiliate him, or Despair Bear wanted to prove that he could control Chloe afterall. Stuff like that.

It kept me like five minutes to write down the seven akumatized supervillains shown thus far in season 3. However, when I got to Backwarder - the episode that spawned PfL - I had a lightning flash of inspiration. I'll talk a bit more about that later. The point now is that I worked on that side project - to my already side project of PfL instead of working on "One and the Same" - instead of editing my final chapter.

Whoops again.

So I tried to hide myself away when I got home, that way I could FINALLY get the story done and posted. Well, between grocery shopping, eating dinner, and realizing the chapter I had written Saturday needed more help than I originally thought.... I didn't post chapter 9 until nearly 11pm!

Oh well, at least it DID get posted. I also received reviews pretty much within the hour, so YAY for fans having my story on an alert of some sort.

If you haven't had a moment to finish off my story, you can get to the final chapter below.

"Prescription for Love: Chapter 9"
On FanFiction            On ArchiveOfOurOwn            On DeviantArt

Just a reminder that you can also use the above links to get to the story, and then use the chapter select, or "More From Lycorogue" to the right of the chapter on DA, in order to get to the first chapter if you've missed this story up until now.

Gladly, not many seemed to have missed this "little" story, at least, when looking at the grand scheme of my readership. As of this posting, here are my stats for this story as a whole.
FFN: 3,860 views, 20 faves, 30 followers, and 22 reviews
AO3: 1,742 hits, 97 kudos, 9 bookmarks, and 22 comments
DA: 78 views, 5 faves, but no comments on any chapter

Total Results: 5,680 views, 122 faves, 39 followers, and 44 reviews

Tumblr Notes: 86 total; 83 likes and 3 re-blogs
This is my 5th-most reviewed story on FFN, which has a total of 29 works posted there, starting as far back as Aug 2010. Comparatively, I have posted 21 stories over on AO3 since I started that up last year, and PfL is the second-most commented on story. “Peeping Tomcat” still has top billing. "Woven Heartstrings" is a close third: 47 comments on PfL and 46 on WH.

So, basically, my multi-chaptered Miraculous Ladybug stories are my main draw.

Now, sadly, I can't filter my works through any other categories on FFN, and I don't want to take the time to go through each story to manually calculate the order. Especially since this update is already half-a-day late. However, I CAN filter through other categories over on AO3....
  • KUDOS: PfL is in third, behind PT and WH, in that order, for most kudos on a story. 
  • BOOKMARKS: PT and WH are still the top two, but my "Hey, Arnold!" one-shot "I Thought You Liked Redheads" squeaks in at 3rd with 11 bookmarks, leaving PfL in 4th with 9.
  • HITS: Once again, PT is number 1 with 8826 hits. WH comes in 2nd with 3219. PfL falls into the number 3 slot again with 1739 hits.
Not too shabby for a plot bunny that was originally going to be a 1000-word one-shot exclusively posted to Tumblr a day after the episode aired, and grew into a nearly 20,000-word multi-chapter story on AO3, FFN, and DA.

You never know where inspiration comes from.

Speaking of! As I mentioned above, on Sunday I tackled a plot-bunny that was brewing in my mind for a month now. It all actually started thanks to Taurus Pixie and her blog. About a month ago, Pixie posted her review of Backwarder, and within that review, Pixie had this paragraph.
However, this scene raised a lot more questions than it answered. When did Master Fu come to Paris? How did he meet Marianne? How did she come to know about the miraculous? She obviously isn't a guardian as it has been stated a few times that Master Fu is the only remaining one alive. So what made Master Fu trust Marianne with such an important secret? More importantly...just who was after the miraculous back then? We heard someone shout that they had to seize the miraculous. Who was it? Gaaah, so many new questions and possibilities have been opened up for us. I do love a good mystery. I always think the show does a really good job at teasing us and letting us catch glimpses of information to help solve everything that's going on. The lore of this show is always super exciting!
The Plot Bunny Alert went off in my head, and I instantly took a screen cap of that paragraph so I could look back at it and contemplate; brew the idea in my head.

What ARE the answers to those questions? I could have fun trying to figure them out. Then, on Sunday, instead of working on editing my final chapter of PfL, I started working on that plot bunny.

BEHOLD! My version of a (Conspiracy) Yard Board.... Just wait until I can find an empty wall somewhere...
Charlie Kelly from It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia
The man, the meme, the legend...
As I was working on my notes for this Master Fu and Marianne Lenoir spin-off fanfic idea, I realized how much story needed to be unpacked. Marianne was a love interest for Fu, and she knew about the Miraculouses. There had to have been a build-up of trust there. It couldn't be a simple "love at first sight" sort of thing. And I wanted to take the time to explore how that trust and love grew.

There were also the questions of why Fu was in Paris just before the Nazi invasion in the first place, why Marianne wanted to stay and fight, why Fu returned to Paris but didn't seek her out right away, and when did Master Fu start wearing the Turtle Miraculous, along with other such questions.

That's when it hit me. This "story" could actually be a legit spin-off. It would be more dark and mature, given that the main characters - Fu and Marianne - were adults, and were dealing with the rise of the Nazi party and start of WWII. It could be part superhero story, part spy story, part romance, part mystery/suspense, the list goes on.

And as I cracked my tired knuckles about three hours into all of my writing and research and math - to figure out why Fu and Marianne didn't seem to age as fast as normal - I realized something about my idea. Well, I realized two things.
  1. It was way too much for me to do as a side project. I had already delayed OatS by two months because of "side projects" like WH and PfL. I would have to wait until OatS was done.
  2. I needed help for this massive undertaking, and who better than the woman who inspired me in the first place? A woman who is a wiz when it comes to historical knowledge, and is almost freakishly fast at writing, when she's at a good mental-health spot. 
So I messaged Pixie. She seems to love the concept, but has questions of her own. This is what I love about collabs; this back-and-forth. I come up with questions and some answers, my answers spark more questions from her, and she answers some of my questions. Her answers - and her questions - makes me wonder more about our world build, and it just keeps going. Eventually, we have a finely woven net, and we're good to go with our story, with little to no chance of someone catching a plot hole we didn't see.
NuaNia FB sticker
by PRANEAT
I just hope this collab goes better than my past ones... Life got in the way of the Jungle Movie script ChibiSunnie and I attempted to write for Script Frenzy once upon a time, and we only got through maybe half of it before our project died.... Then, when Ronoxym and I attempted our Devon/Willow collab, I sort of hijacked the project, and bloated it to the point where it was overwhelming to Ron, and that story also died.... Although, I'm still determined to edit it down again to a point where Ron and I could go back to working on it.

As much fun as building this concept will be with Pixie, I hope we can keep our steam and balance going long enough to actually complete it; even if it takes a year or so.

Regardless, I still need to finish OatS first, and Pixie needs a vacation from writing until she gets her affairs in better order, and her mind can properly and fully re-charge. We probably won't start it until May at the earliest. Maybe closer to June or July.

We'll probably casually throw What Ifs to each other in the meantime though.


But first! OatS while participating in Camp NaNo!

I had also said above that I had been doing some reading. Yes. It is true. Lots of reading, actually. I managed to read the last third or so of "Armada" by Ernest Cline over the past week. I had meant to read it January. I didn't start reading it until about half-way through February. I didn't finish it until the end of March.

I'm doing real well with this year's reading schedule....

I still haven't even really come up with a To Read list, even though I have a ROOM full of books waiting for me to crack them open. Instead, I've been reading fanfics, fanfics, more fanfics, and... oh hey! Fanfics!

So, new goal. No actual list of completed works. No count of 12 stories. Instead, I'm going for word-count, that way 2000-word fanfics also count, because it's still time spent reading.

Here are my rules:
  • I wrote an 80,000+ word novel, and most of the ones I read tend to range between 80,000 and 120,000 words. So I'm going to split the difference and round a novel to about 100,000 words.
  • I still want to read the equivalent of 12 novels by the end of the year.
  • That means I need to read 1,200,000 words of fiction by 11:59pm on December 31st.
I need to go back through the fanfics I've read the first 3 months, so my overall word count might actually err towards a low estimate, just to be safe and fair.

In the meantime, though, I checked on "Armada." It's harder for professionally published works, because they generally don't come with a word count like fanfics do. However, assuming the website ReadingLength.com is accurate, there are 102,950 words in "Armada." What's actually really cool about that site is that it can help you estimate how long it will take to read something. Neat bit of knowledge if you are trying to figure out if it's worth reading, or if you have the time to cram a book into your schedule. Or even if you want to make sure you're packing enough to read for a trip....

I also now know that I average at about 160 words per minute - I am quite the slow reader - and so my next tackling of "Atlas Shrugged" - a book that ReadingLength has listed at 455,300 words - should take me nearly 48hours to conquer. Once you add in that I'll be stopping to take notes so the story is a bit easier for me to sift out, it will probably be about double that length.... And I tend to only manage about 2hrs tops per day for reading, if I read at all.

Anyway, without adding in fanfic word counts, I'm nearly at 103,000 words. It's a start.

Also, while I was kinda close on what the "big twist" for the conclusion of "Armada" was, I was also wrong, and there were a couple other surprises I hadn't predicted. So, Cline did pull off a few "Oh. Neat!" moments within the story.

I don't know what it was, though. Aside from Lex, and another character I won't mention here due to spoilers, I didn't really connect with any of the characters. By the end of the book, the Two Mikes that were the main character's best friends were still indistinguishable for me. There were some moments where you were SUPPOSED to feel for the support characters, but was just kind of "oh. That sucks." I just couldn't empathize with anyone in this novel for whatever reason.

There were also some elements of the story - much like with "Ready Player One" - where you could tell that Cline doesn't quite understand the difference between telling a story via visual media vs. through print media. In other words, it's obvious, for me, at least, that Cline started off as a script writer. The main character Zack didn't have as much Plot Armor on him this go, but there was still a fair amount of Deus ex Machina. At least, what I would consider "well, THAT was convenient" moments. I mean, to be fair, some of it was done on purpose for the mystery of the story, but there are times where the "that was convenient" extended past where it should be; once I thought back on the story as a whole.

All-in-all? The story wasn't for me. I'll stick with "Ready Player One," and perhaps give "Armada" another read when the movie adaptation comes out.

Yup. Another movie adaptation. Like I said, the guy is a script writer by default, so his stories seem to always have a twin movie.

Okay, well, enough bellyaching about Cline's novels, and going on forever about why I don't have progress on my own. This blog post is now 5hrs late, I still have to eat, and I have writing group in less than an hour.

So, I'm waving the white flag here. I'll catch you guys next week. You'll probably just be finishing reading this post by then.

Tuesday, March 5, 2019

I Might Need My Own Prescription

Another.... interesting week is in the books.

Yet again, I had neglected to audit my time, so I only vaguely recall what it was I did this past week. The vague recollection might also be a result of my mind completely swimming this week. Roughly around the time I posted my last blog update, I was starting to get sick. It was a nasty tickle in my throat and a violent, dry cough. I was light-headed and ended up with a few intense headaches from coughing so much. I tried a whole assortment of over-the-counter meds to try to stop the cough. Eventually, I landed on a Dayquil knock-off. Worked like a charm... sorta.

I don't know if the drug actually solved the coughing symptoms, or if it was a coincidental switch to a new med at the same time my symptoms “evolved.” The cough stopped, but the nose started going. And going. And going. I was a human faucet for the better part of two days. My routine was sneeze, blow nose, Purell my hands, sigh from exhaustion, spray down my work space with Lysol, and repeat. I went through an entire box of tissues within an 8-hr work day. I nearly went through a full 1-fl-oz travel-size bottle of Purell over the course of two work days. I'm not entirely sure how much of my 15oz can of Lysol I went through....

Between the coughing fits, and then the non-stop nose running and sneezing – which was borderline giving me whiplash with how violent my sneezes are as well – AND the need to still go out car shopping.... It's been an exhausting week. At least twice, I shut myself away in my bedroom to try to quarantine myself and get some rest. I also witnessed the creepy Big Brother powers of the internet. When I mentioned on Facebook how I always seem to want to watch Osmosis Jones when I have a particularly nasty head cold, I turned around to find a Real Doctor Reacts to Osmosis Jones video in my suggestion bar on YouTube. Yaaaaaaay....

Not nearly as bad as my co-worker who simply mentioned, verbally, about an item, only for said item to show up as a Facebook targeted ad. Whooo, cell phones listening in for internet companies!

Let's move away from the creepy uber-monitoring of our day-to-day lives though. But not TOO far away, because it nicely ties in with “Armada.”

With my head floating away all week, it was hard to really focus enough to write anything. I did add some words to “Prescription for Love” but I didn't quite hit my goal of having the story COMPLETED before the month was out. My updating once every three days – something I'll come back to – does seem to give me enough of a head-start, though. With my cold easing up quite a bit, I SHOULD be able to finish the story without disrupting or delaying my update schedule.

Back to “Armada” though. Since I couldn't really concentrate enough to write, I figured I'd try to read instead. It's now March, and I have yet to complete a professionally-written story. I've read fanfiction – which I'll comment on a little further down – but nothing professional. I completely slacked off in January because I was focused on “WovenHeartstrings” and February was much of the same between trying to get back on track with “One and the Same” and then derailing myself again with “Prescription for Love.”

I was sick. I was locking myself away in my room, or hiding from customers if I wasn't needed to help them. Why not use this time to finally catch up on my reading?

Guys. I'm trying, but I'm still kind of whatever about “Armada.” I still have little emotional investment in Zack, and even routinely forget that's the main character's name. Thankfully, he's addressed frequently enough that I'm reminded. Alternatively, I JUST got introduced to a character named Lex, and, frankly, I'm much more interested in her story. She seems so out-of-place even though she's supposed to be with her peers. I want to know why. Why is she getting drunk? Why is she a misfit among "her people"?

Since I've read “Ender's Game” before, and the book is even referenced a couple of times in the opening chapters of "Armada," a lot of the “big surprise” moments really.... weren't. I was expecting them, and was actually wondering what kept so long to get to them. The basic concept of the Armada game – and other such alien invasion games, movies, and TV shows – wasn't quite as sinister as I had expected, given the close ties to “Ender's Game,” so that was a nice switch-up, but still. It felt very predictable thus far. The biggest surprise to me, which, probably shouldn't have been, was who Zack's handler was. I knew they were involved in some form, I just didn't realize to what extent.

But now we're coming up on the actual alien invasion. Zack has a few internal questions about it, and these mysteries are setting me on edge. Because, if I'm right in what it all means, it kind of annoys me that all of these gamer characters aren't seeing the pattern just as quickly.

Now, this next part is going to be heavy on early Act II spoilers, but I'm only 190 pages within a 481-page novel. So, I don't know how “spoilery” this really is going to be for the story as a whole. Still, if you haven't read “Armada” yet, wish to, and don't want spoilers, feel free to scroll ahead a little bit.
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So, for the history of “Armada,” in the 1960s, a NASA satellite passed Jupiter's moon Europa, and discovered the surface of this icy moon covered in a giant swastika. Unsure what it all meant, they sent a probe to examine it further. As the probe penetrated the ice surface of the moon to better examine what could have caused the anomaly, it disappeared, only to later send off a signal stating that Earthlings had desecrated sacred land, and must be destroyed. The swastika then vanished from the surface of Europa. For the next forty years, the alien life on Europa – Europans – built up an armada to attack Earth. However, some of this build to total Earthling annihilation bugged Zack.

First, why wait 40 years? Why not take out the planet with a much smaller attack group, back when we were too technologically stunted to successfully fight back? Two, why build the armada above the surface of Europa, and in plain sight of our satellites, instead of under the frozen surface, which is where the Europans clearly lived? Third, why attack with spaceships instead of sending a few scout ships with a biological weapon or the like? Fourth: Humans are only now prepared to fight back, and that's because we were able to finally figure out how to reverse engineer technology taken off of scout ships sent to Earth decades ago. Why did the clearly technologically superior Europans even allow Humanity to have their tech, let alone leave us enough time to figure it out? The Europans didn't even start their armada's trek to Earth until after humans attempted an attack on Europa. It was almost like the Europans were waiting for proof that our technology was on par with theirs, at least, to some extent. Five: after 40 years of observing Europa and experimenting on the tech landed on Earth, humans know about their technology, and the drones they send to fight us, but we still have no clue the biology of the alien invaders. Finally, the Europan armada is coming in three, increasingly more difficult waves. The first wave has the basic forces and one “mothership,” as it were, and then, about three hours later, the second wave has slightly more advanced forces and two “motherships”, followed by the third wave with the most advanced forces and three “motherships.”

So now I'm sitting here going “Holy crow! It's a Tower Defense game! The knowledge of an invading force – along with a rough estimate of how large the force is - the allotted time to set up defenses and offenses, the invaders coming in waves of increasing difficulty, the “boss battles”: the Motherships. It all feels like a Tower Defense game.” I then wondered if the “twist” of the story will be that the Europans think THEY are playing a game the whole time. They have seen Earth's peace offerings of media, and somehow a tower defense-like game was included, so the Europans decide to “play.” They set up a false threat of total annihilation, since that's what happens in that style of game, and then they make sure we are prepared for the invasion by letting us know how many players are involved, and even send us some tech to use so it's a more even playing field. The Europans use drones instead of their actual populous, so it's not like they're endangering their own people by “playing.”

I swear, if it turns out that the Europans are playing offense on a Tower Defense game and NOT. A. SINGLE. CHARACTER. NOTICES. THIS? I'll probably literally throw the book across the room.

Come on, Ernest Cline, surprise me, here.
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OKAY! SPOILERS OVER NOW! YOU CAN START READING AGAIN IF YOU SKIPPED THE LAST PART!

Long story short? “Armada” just doesn't have the same magic to it – for me, at least – as “Ready Player One” did, and that might be why I'm not flipping through the pages quite as quickly. Same thing happened when I went through the Kane Chronicles books by Rick Riordan, and when I attempted to read “Atlas Shrugged” a couple of years back.

Part of me gets why so many people are turning from professionally published stories, and turning towards fanfiction for most of their reading entertainment. I find myself unintentionally doing the same thing. First of all, you know the world and/or the characters already. You know you enjoy them. Secondly, the episodic nature of chapters being publicly posted one-by-one makes them less daunting to read, and adds excitement when you see a story you follow updated. I can only think of three real downsides: (1) it's not professionally edited, so you do have to weed through stories that could have been improved with a nice polish, (2) episodic chapter updates may disengage the reader, depending on how long it takes to update the story, because the reader may forget what happened in the chapter(s) before the update, and (3) the author may abandon the project.

I've lucked out, and only stumbled upon one or two “Hey, Arnold!” stories that were abandoned, and the only “abandoned” Miraculous story I read was TaurusPixie's “Immortal Bond,” but that was because the plot wasn't working as-is, so she's starting it over from scratch. I'll read the completed story eventually.

Speaking of reading fanfiction, a story I follow updated this week, so I did sneak that in along with my “Armada” readings.


The story started off as a one-shot, but then she enjoyed the story she created, and she got enough love for her one-shot, that she decided to continue. It's an “Enemy AU,” which usually translates to an Alternate Universe where Cat Noir is on Hawk Moth's side and battles against Ladybug. One of the first ML fanfics I read – "Curiosity andSatisfaction" by imthepunchlord – was an Enemy AU. If you find the right author, the Enemy AU is very intriguing; seeing how Adrien and Marinette interact when they're enemies instead of allies.

Anyway, Discordant Sonata is up to 4 chapters. There was a content warning in the latest chapter, however. So if you are triggered by claustrophobia and/or a character dealing with a panic attack, maybe you should skip this chapter....

Otherwise, go read it. I am really enjoying this story, and cannot wait for more. Fair warning before any new readers get into Eden's work, though. She's a busy mother who focuses on her artwork, so there could be a month or two wait between updates. Please do not harass her if you don't think she's updating regularly enough.

Oh, and speaking of "Enemy AU" fanfics, while it's not QUIIIIIIITE the same, HariWrites has that Con-man/Thief AU story I talked about last year: "Mr. Lucky and the Cat." It was a really good read. I highly suggest you check it out. However, you only have until March 31st, 2019 to do so. She just posted, as a tag-on chapter, that she's planning on reworking and publishing the story. So she is going to take it off of AO3 by the end of the month. Luckily, AO3 allows for downloads. So go snag it now while you can!

As for my own story, well, I have three chapters of “Prescription for Love” up. The chapters are short, so the whole story thus far is only 3700+ words long. I had chapters of “Peeping Tomcat” longer than that. Much longer than that. About three times longer....

I write long chapters...



This time, though! This time I have little bite-sized ones. Chapter 1 was only about 1000 words, chapter 2 was about 1100, and chapter 3 just passed 1500.

AAAAACTUALLY.... Funny thing about the latest chapter. I had been writing down how many words each section was after I wrote it. By the time I finished the sixth chapter, which should be the last one told from Kagami's perspective, the word count was Adrien: 4929, Kagami: 4982. So, without even meaning to, I had both characters have almost identical amount of page-time. Adrien was then going to blow Kagami out of the water as he finished up the story, adding roughly another 1000 words to his count, but the story was originally going to be his, so it seemed fitting.

Then, Sunday evening, as I hid away to polish up the third chapter to post, I realized it didn't really work.

As a transitional scene, it wasn't all that bad. As a chapter, though? Nothing happened. There was no action, no agency. Adrien returned from the akuma attack, noted how strange it was that his father was in a bathroom for over an hour, realized that it appeared he was in the bathroom for just as long, attempted and failed to have an engaging conversation with Kagami, and listened to music.

I needed more. This would have been the only chapter that didn't focus on the “love letter” Adrien got from Marinette, so that needed to be fixed at the very least. Another 500 words - and an hour - later, and I was satisfied with the chapter finally. So much for Kagami having almost even page-time with Adrien, though. Buuuut, I haven't edited the next chapters yet, so who knows?

In the meantime, here are the next two chapters.

"Chapter 2"
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"Chapter 3"
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Chapter 4 of PfL will be live sometime tomorrow evening.
Not my best work, I know. This is why I'm not a cover artist.
I need to find the magic I had for PT when I create the cover for OatS....
The story has been getting a moderate amount of love. Oddly enough, it's the first story I have with almost identical amount of hits between FFN and AO3. Over on FFN, the story has had 797 hits. AO3 has had 767. A fun little factoid.

On FFN, I've had 7 reviews from 4 different readers. On AO3, I've had one reviewer, but they've reviewed all three chapters so far. The posting on FFN has had 14 faves and 15 follows, whereas on AO3, it has had 46 kudos and 5 bookmarks.

Like I said: moderate success.

To be honest, considering how far past the episode my story is dragging, and how it is directly tied to an episode, I'm surprised I'm getting even that much love. So, if you're one of those readers, thank you.
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Over on Tumblr, my announcement of the new story received five likes. The promo for the second chapter jumped up to 16 likes. The promo for the third chapter this past Sunday is at 12 likes. So, I'm getting some viewership on Tumblr.

I really need to remember to sample some of the work though..... I keep forgetting that bit.

Oh! Another cool thing about Tumblr, which kind of relates to those likes and views? I garnered another 7 new followers this week. Which means I'm now at over 100 followers! Barely a drop in the bucket in the grand scheme of things, but it's an exciting milestone to me.

Remember, I mostly reblog stuff. I rarely post anything original. I even started up a tag - LycoRogue Original - to help filter out the few bits I actually ADD to the site. It's mostly promos for my stories and this blog.

Point being, having 100 people follow me, and only have about six of them be IRL friends? That's super cool to me. So, if you're a follower, thanks. Makes me feel special.
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One last thing before I pretend I'm going to be productive this week. My thumbdrive was acting up yet again the past few days, so I decided to reformat it for about the fifth time. Before doing so, though, I spent two days going through all of the files to make sure I have them saved elsewhere first. Part of this task, and the reason it kept so long, was comparing files with identical names but different modification dates. I wanted to compare and contrast to see which version I wanted to keep, and if the versions were different enough, I renamed the older one and shoved it in an "original version" folder. I don't delete files. I don't get rid of past versions of something I've polished. First of all, it helps me see where I came from and the progress I made in the story. Secondly, there may have been something good in that old version that just didn't quite work with the story at the time. I like being able to go back to those older versions to gold-mine for bits I could use in my newer stories. Finally, I like having older, maybe even cringey-er, versions to show to aspiring writers. If they really enjoy my work, and may even think my writing is far above their capabilities, I like to show them that I start from trash just as much as they do. It's all about practice and polish. Putting in the work after the story is out of your head.

That's just my personal philosophy though.

My point being, that reading through these files meant reading through what I have so far for OatS. And it restarted my drive to really get this story done. It's been delayed so many times, and it looks like my derailment in both January and February has pushed back the release once more. Probably looking at a June/July release now, unless I can make magic happen during April's Camp NaNoWriMo. Still, if you have been waiting for this story, know that I haven't abandoned the idea. I still absolutely want to write it. I just need to stop working on other plot-bunnies in the meantime....

Speaking of, I still need to finish PfL and edit the next chapter for tomorrow. So I should jet. Catch you next week!

Oh, and happy Donut Day/Fat Tuesday/Faschnaut Day/Shrove Tuesday/etc....
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Tuesday, February 26, 2019

Farewell, Geodude

It's been a weird week. I felt like I barely did anything, but I also felt exhausted from everything I did....

I slacked off this week and didn't really write anything down in my daily planner, where I audit my time to make sure I'm not slacking off. Yes. I know the irony....
Did I meme correctly?
Characters from the anime Ouran High School Host Club
As I've mentioned many times in the past, for whatever reason Irony just LOVES to hang out with me... go figure.

Meh. Could be worse. Could be this....
Technically, it's more my coworker's daughter that drama loves...
The worst part is neither of those poor women ever start it.
Characters from the anime Fairy Tail
Anyway, enough of me showing off how bad I am at meme-ing....

My point is that I don't really know WHAT happened this week, because, like I said, I feel like I did a lot and yet nothing at the same time.

Well, to start, I cleaned my apartment a bit, ran around to do my normal errands, and did both days of Zumba, which is something I don't think I've done since before Christmas. Boy did my legs remind me of that. I also wrote more of my one-shot inspired by the "Miraculous Ladybug" episode Backwarder, while somehow simultaneously not finishing it due to procrastination.

Friday and Saturday the store was SLAMMED, so I didn't have any time to write while at work. Friday I had Wolfhearted over to watch Backwarder and Stormy Weather 2, and we also briefly discussed characters for a campaign he wants to run in the near future. No post-work writing there. Then, Saturday, I was NOT feeling well. I hid in my room after work. Originally it was because my lower back had been throbbing all day and I wanted to lie down. However, as the day progressed, my stomach started to act up, so my lie down to write after work turned into lie down and watch hours worth of YouTube videos because I couldn't find the energy to write.

In truth, I should have spent the time at least reading more of "Armada" since I only finished up the first act of the story yesterday afternoon. I still have about 300 pages to read! I don't think I'm finishing by the end of the month.....

Ernest Cline, based only on the first act of the book, definitely did not have lightning strike twice. The book is entertaining, but doesn't seem to be as gripping and page-turning as "Ready Player One" was. I guess I'm more into 80s nostalgia with a side of gaming than I am into alien invasion First Person Shooter gaming with a side of 80s and early 90s nostalgia. We'll see if the story picks up steam now that I'm in the main bulk of the tale...

But back to my own writing.

Sunday I was able to do some editing and add in a few more paragraphs, but I was still nursing my back and stomach, while also prepping myself to go see "How To Train Your Dragon: The Hidden World."

We had a whole crew of us hitting up the local theater: six in all.

The movie was gorgeous to watch, and while there are some tweaks I would have done with the story, all-in-all, it was the perfect close to the franchise. It also gave the six of us a nice running gag for the next few weeks at least:
"CRY INTO MY MANLY BEARD!"
It was such an enjoyable movie, and one we were so excited to watch, that not only didn't I neglect to do more writing after Hubby and I got home, but I also neglected to watch The Oscars as well.... I think this is the first one I've missed since I started learning about video production in college.
Again, Irony seems to really love me... PAINFULLY so....
Characters from the anime Fullmetal Alchemist
Best part is, if missing the Oscars because I was watching a movie wasn't enough, I also spent the couple of hours between work and the movie with Omnibladestrike in order to - get this - help him write his story! Yup. I didn't work on my writing because I was helping someone else with their own.

Whoops!


Meh, it was worth it though. Omni was in a funk for a while, and decided to just start his whole novel from scratch to try to build a better foundation. Especially since the novel he's been working on for the past few years is actually the precursor to the original novel he wanted to tell. So he has to make sure he's happy with the groundwork he's laying with this tale.

I want to encourage that, and help it grow.

Awww, just look how nurturing Magi is. The way she directs Crysta's hand and then just proudly watches as Crysta rebuilds from the crumpled remains of the former tree?
Last one of these memes, I swear
Characters from the movie FernGully: The Last Rainforest
Okay, I was probably stroking my own ego a bit there with this comparison, but you get the idea....

Alright, so that was my weekend, but what about before that? Or after it?

Well... I did write a LITTLE at work on Thursday, but then my brain died on me, so Thursday night was spent editing, a little extra writing, and screen captures so I could design cover art for my story. A task I never actually completed.... I then researched potential name ideas to see if I had a unique one to use.



Okay, so the title I'm going with is fine. No hits on either AO3 or FFN. However, the first title I was going to go with? "For You"? Yeah... there's like 30 fanfics in the Miraculous fandom alone that has that title....

And this is why I check.

Wednesday though! Wednesday I wrote while doing laundry. I was then going to write some more while waiting for my car to be inspected and get an oil change. I was doing well.

And then I wasn't.

Turns out that, while I knew the problem with my high beams, and had a creative way to work around it, I had more issues with my car than I thought. For one, even with my MacGyvering, the high beams not properly working is enough to not pass inspection. Two: my back-up lights weren't working either. The biggen, though, is that my axles were all rusting through. The mechanic even warned me that I'm "one good pothole away from losing a tire."

YAY!


So, while the car is still driveable, there is no hope of it passing inspection, which expires on March 1st. Which means, it's time to say goodbye to another car.

Farewell, Geodude, you served me decently for three years.

It is actually MUCH smaller than it probably looks in this picture.
I also love that every car I've owned has that pin-stripe along the sides.
Rozsavaria got me that sticker to turn my Geo Metro into a GEODUDE Metro.
Fainted Geodude from Pokemon
Basically my car as of March....
So the rest of Wednesday consisted of searching the internet for cars I can buy for no more than $2000, calming my mother and sister down, Zumba, "The Masked Singer" tv show, and more online car searching. Noooooot really much time to write.

Which also means that, yes, the rest of the week did have me periodically checking out cars online in my downtime as well. Today is my first day off since I found out about my Geodude, so it's being largely spent checking out cars. Hopefully I can find one before tonight's writer's group meeting so I don't have to miss YET. ANOTHER. ONE.

If I can't find a car today, Friday is my next chance. Thankfully, Hubby's one friend offered us a loaner car, should we strike out today.

......

Soooooo, uh.... yeah.

There you have it.

My week largely consisted of me procrastinating, nursing myself back to health - which I'm still kinda, sorta doing - and looking for a new car.

Whooo!

I DID manage to do three things yesterday though.

One: Realize the story I've been working on could be a chaptered novelette. I was originally using line breaks to jump from Adrien's POV to Kagami's and back. However, each scene is at least 1000 words long, so why not make short chapters instead?

Two: Managed to finish up my first 2000+ word section - now chapter - of the story, as well as start up the penultimate chapter.

Three: Post the first chapter online, and set it up that I'll post the second one Thursday evening. I figured, an "every 3 days" schedule will be fairly fast of a turn-around, but still afford me enough time to finish the story and polish it while still dealing with the mess my life fell into this week.

Unlike my other stories, my newest one is basically embedded within an episode of Miraculous Ladybug. It is very spoilerific for the episode, so if you haven't watched Backwarder and don't want spoilers, I'd skip over this story.

Otherwise, you probably don't really NEED to know more about the show than what I talk about in this blog, so feel free to check it out, even if you don't watch the show. Each chapter should be between 1000 and 1600 words, except for the fifth one, which will be pushing closer to 2500 words. Still, super short considering my normal chapters, right?

Without further ado, I present you with:
"Prescription for Love"
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SUMMARY:
This was not the weekend away Kagami was expecting, but then again, what was written on Marinette's letter wasn't what Adrien as expecting either. As Kagami tries to understand Adrien's confusion, and find time to try to woo him from Marinette, Adrien is busy trying to understand Marinette's train-side send-off, and finding a pharmacy.
I posted "Prescription for Love" - a story that was timely two weeks ago... - at 8:30 last night, and already had one review, 3 follows/bookmarks, 14 faves/kudos, and 198 hits by the time I went to bed at 11:30. I didn't even remember to promote the story! Short and sweet, and dealing with one of the most talked about episodes still, was a good way to go apparently. We'll see how people feel about that once I get to Kagami's side of the story....

It's going to be hard for me to wait until Thursday to post the next part.

I also don't know what to read at group tonight. Do I continue with reading "Woven Heartstrings" even though that story is long done, Christmas is far enough past that my tree is actually down, and they haven't heard more than the first chapter in months? Do I start them on "Prescription for Love" even though I need to basically explain the whole subplot of Backwarder before starting? Or do I go back to reading bits of "One and the Same"?

I guess I could offer all three up for them to decide? This is the only real problem with quickly turning out smaller works. And having meetings continuously cancelled due to snow...

Anyway, I have until I go to bed on Thursday to accomplish two of three things:
  1. Find myself a new car
  2. Complete PfL so I can hit my goal, even if the whole thing isn't POSTED by the close of the month.
  3. Use one of two new plot bunny ideas to write a legit SHORT, SHOOOOOORT, SNIIIIIIIPPET of a story so a completed new story is fully posted online by the end of the month.
Preferably, I'd like the new car to be one of the two things I accomplish....

One final note before I go car hunting. My writing group co-member has done his soft-launches the past month or so, but this Saturday, March 2nd, is his official book launch for "Parabellum."
Summary:
How does a POW become a spy? And why? And what the hell is a GALCO? These are only a few of the questions Carson Nowak needs answers to. Carson Nowak is a CIA contractor like none you’ve ever met before. Carson is tasked with retrieving a trunk full of documents. The order comes not from the Agency or even the President, but a higher authority: his nana. In addition to the documents, the trunk also contains a war relic tied to a mysterious death just before D-Day. Tracing the provenance of this relic triggers a chain of events that not only unlocks Carson’s family history but garners the interest of a South American hit squad. Carson must navigate the challenges of protecting his family, maintaining his business, ensuring the safety of a young refugee developing a revolutionary weapons system, and deal with an infuriating curmudgeon. Along the way he falls in love. To navigate these challenges, he enlists the help of a pencil-thin code breaker, a claustrophobic corpsman and a Haitian nurse.

PARABELLUM, the novel, is spy/mystery/thriller novel set in Upstate NY, with flashbacks to both World War I and World War II.
PARABELLUM, the word, is a Latin term which loosely translates to “When you live in peace, Prepare for war”.
The writing style is a mash-up of C.J. Box meets Daniel Silva, meets John le Carre.
You can find the novel in both paperback and ebook on Amazon. I already shared the link just above the picture, but here's another one just to be sure you see it.

If you're into modern-historical - as in, the summer of 2001 - stories, and/or spy thriller novels, then go check this one out. If you personally don't want to shell out the few bucks, then ask your library to order a copy that you could then borrow. Let's get the word out there!

Man, between "Parabellum" and "Leather and Lies," my friends will convert me to a spy-thriller reader in no time.

Seems only fair, considering how many I'm converting to fanfiction enthusiasts....

Speaking of which, there will be no fanfic to be enthused about if I don't find a car with enough time left for me to write! So I better get going.

Tuesday, February 12, 2019

And Still More Snow...

What is it with Tuesdays and snow lately???? It always seems to hit on a Tuesday or Sunday this winter. At least, the bad snow storms. This is the second time the writer's group meeting is cancelled due to winter weather advisory. Which is such a bummer, because I also missed the first ever meeting of the year due to work. It's depressing to know I've only been able to attend one meeting since 2019 started.

Stupid snow.

Also, interesting factoid: my unexplained preference for British spellings and vernacular continues with, oddly enough, the past tense version of 'cancel'. Yup, above you may have noticed that I spelled it as 'cancelled', which may have looked odd to most of you. There are times where I'll write the word with only one 'l', usually because I'm typing too fast, but there won't be a spell-check squiggle under it. So I looked it up, and both versions - one 'l' and two - are correct. Americans, thanks to the Webster's Dictionary spellings, tend to spell the word 'canceled' while Brits lean more on the 'cancelled' side of the fence. Personally, I think the word looks more "complete" with the second 'l', which is why I tend to default to that spelling. Regardless, it's just another word where I favor the British version, and I'm not entirely sure why I bounce between the two versions of English: British vs American.

It must drive readers crazy trying to figure out what side of The Pond I hail from....

Anyway, even without the prospect of a writer's group meeting, I'm trying to push through my completion of "One and the Same." I'm still struggling with that darn final chapter though. I think I have Marinette calmed down, Adrien relieved, everything that needs to be said at least planned out, and the makings of a satisfying ending.

However, I keep thinking of more things.....

One of them is a fairly crucial question Marinette asks Adrien, and, frankly? I didn't know the answer. I THOUGHT I did, but I couldn't remember the nitty-gritty details of "Peeping Tomcat" enough to be positive. So I spent the past couple of days reading/skimming through PT to make sure I have my continuity all in order. Thankfully, I didn't paint myself into a wall with PT, so I just have to make sure I avoid plot holes and/or contradictory scenes/statements throughout OatS.

It's been a bit exhausting to go back through my story instead of working on my new one, but at the same time, I find myself lost in my own writing during my re-read, causing me to read more than I needed to.

I'm loving how much I'm still enjoying my own story. Yay! Go me!
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Speaking of enjoying my work, this past week I received a pleasantly surprising review on “Woven Heartstrings”:
Wildfire's Flame: I really enjoyed this story and don't know that I would have found it if not for Taurus Pixies blog. I enjoyed the story immensely. I love reading things with warmth and caring and sweet gooieness. Makes me warm and fuzzy inside. The worry dolls were great but I loved the crocheting and the part where Adriens dad was actually a dad for once in his life. Thank you for a truly beautiful and thought out story. It's a great gift for your friend and to all of us that love the show.
First of all, this is just such a lovely review. I loved that Wildfire's Flame enjoyed my writing so much. Secondly, it's awesome to know that Wildfire found my story via the amazing Taurus Pixie's blog. She frequently promotes and/or reviews my stories on her blog, and the fact that she's apparently bringing me more traffic is awesome! Pixie, you are a beautiful human being!
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The rub, though, is that Wildfire's Flame has private messaging deactivated on Fanfiction.net. I can't reply to them to thank them for the review, or even for just reading my story. I have no way of them seeing how much I appreciate that they took some of their time and spent it with my work.

The kicker is that Wildfire is slowly making their way through my other writing, and leaving reviews there as well. Here's what they had to say about “Peeping Tomcat”:
Wildfire's Flame: Wow. Just wow. I have been slowly reading this over the past couple days. I loved it. Poor Adrien. I loved your akumas and I loved the way the characters all were. The battle scenes were well thought out and the festival was a great idea. Thank you for a wonderful story. I loved it.
Well, thank you, Wildfire, for your wonderful reviews. I love those as well!

Finally, here's their review of “Build Your Own Luck”:
Wildfire's Flame: So sweet. I loved it. Very nicely done and I can picture a 5 year old doing just that. Thank you for this brief moment in time.
GAAAAAH! Wildfire! Who are you!? Why won't you let me thank you for taking the time to read and review my works!?!?!

Wildfire's Flame, if you are reading this, know that your reviews are so appreciated. You are not shouting into the void. And thank you for letting me know I'm not doing the same. You, dear reader, are awesome sauce, and you are very welcome for the stories I put out for your consumption.

Also, one last shout-out to Pixie for leading Wildfire my way in the first place. Thank you so much for taking the time to promote my work on your blog! Also also, if any of my readers like some Miraculous Ladybug fanfiction with some Lukanette goodness and/or jealous Chat Noir, you HAVE to check out Pixie's latest fic Chat Vert. Her Luka is perfectly true-to-show, and her other depictions of the characters are so in-character I could hear their voices during all the dialogue. There's a nice balance of angst and fluff and goofiness. Just.... go! Read it!

Finally, if you want to know more about Pixie's writing schedule for her four WIPs, or her thoughts on Miraculous Ladybug - via episode reviews and mini-essays - you should head on over to her blog. Again, the link is here.

And since I'm talking about reading anyway, I might as well note that I've FINALLY started really reading "Armada." I'm only about 3 or 4 chapters in, so I still have most of the book to read this month. It's an interesting concept, but so far the story isn't really pulling me in like "Ready Player One" did. The whole story seems to be built around a conspiracy theory that was supposed to sound crazy at first, but presumably will be 100% true. So, said theory needs to be first established. Alright, but I kind of know that everything is going to be true, so the "mysterious" build up just seems to drag on. I dunno. Ernest Cline did a better job at world building - literally, since there were different "worlds" you could go to in The OASIS - for his first book.

As of right now? Only a few chapters into "Armada"? It just feels like a rehash of "Ender's Game". The book even notes that as one of the center-points of the conspiracy: the first time Sci-Fi depicted children playing video games to train as soldiers, specifically for a war against aliens. Everything is focused on that concept: playing war-themed video games where aliens are the enemy, and how said games might be disguised training of the unknowing soldiers. A way to recruit the best of the best based on high ranking scores....

I like the concept. I just hope Cline picks up the pacing a bit. Especially since we aren't given much by way of character development for anyone, so I'm not particularly attached to any of them. Not even the main character. Not yet, anyway.

I just hope I can do better with "One and the Same." I don't want it to be like "Ready Player One" and "Armada." Granted, Cline's stories are separate entities - although they feel REALLY similar; same themes and everything thus far - but RPO was engaging from the first few pages, and I instantly fell in love with Wade, Aech, and Art3mis. Meanwhile, "Armada" seems to meander, and I'm not invested in any of the characters. I couldn't even tell you the difference between the main character Zack's two best friends Cruz and Diehl. They're just always a unit; even given the same first name: Michael. I can't even remember who voted for Mjolner vs Sting in their debate about best fantasy weapon.

I'm struggling with OatS, whereas PT felt like it flowed through me. It was a story that grabbed hold and wouldn't let me go. Whereas OatS has scenes that I'm itching for the world to read, but the over-all story just doesn't seem to want to form. I'm trying. I really am, but I fear that it's going to be like "Armada": a lack-luster second story from an author who had a promising first novel. Granted, for me the "first novel" is a free-to-read, published-online fanfic. But still....

I just need to study "Armada" and note the pitfalls Cline tripped into, and try to avoid doing the same thing for OatS. Hopefully that, plus some careful planning and decent editing, will help me keep OatS as intriguing as PT was.

I can also take what went wrong with "Armada", add in the critiques I had for "Ready Player One" - such as the obvious Plot Armor on Wade - and learn what to avoid when I'm writing my own original works. Whenever THAT will be....

I also need to remind myself that, while I should strive to write the best I can for my faithful readers, I AM still writing free-to-read, website-published fanfiction. No one is expecting it to be professional quality. It is always a pleasant surprise to find fanfiction that is so finely polished, but no one is EXPECTING it.

I can experiment with fanfiction. I can grow with fanfiction. I can get reader feedback as I'm posting my chapters in order to know where I'm going wrong and what I'm doing right. I can practice, fail, and recover within fanfiction.

I need to take some pressure off. But not TOO much pressure... otherwise I may never finish writing this sequel. Speaking of, I should get back to working on that ending so I know where I'm headed for the rest of the story....

Stay warm out there!
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