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Tuesday, January 29, 2019

Preparing for More Snow

This week didn't go as expected. The long and the short of it is that I only managed to write for about an hour a day. Be that because I actually had to - GASP - work at my job!, or I had home-invaders, or Hubby wanted to watch Netflix together, or my hands were frozen with the latest cold snap and snow storms that came in, or.... I simply wasn't motivated. Usually, it was a day combining just about all of those "reasons" that caused my lack of writing.

I did get at least an hour of writing in each day though! Again, yesterday not included.... Stupid Mondays... So I'm now up to 5 days this month that I haven't written. That also means I did write 24 days this month so far. I'll take it.
So. Many. Smiles.
Also, while I wasn't able to finish "Woven Heartstrings" in its entirety, like I wanted, I was able to complete the main story. Getting a new chapter up within the week isn't terrible. Not as quick of a turn-around as I would have liked, but it's still fairly quick for a raw-first-draft-to-final-product turn-around. At least, for me.
Chapter 7: Always With You
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I'm glad my chapter titles slowly improved as I went along...

All I have left of the story is the epilogue. I started off WH with my chapters ranging about 3000-words to 3500-words long. Then, when I started doing the gift exchanges in chapter 5, I jumped up to 5000+ words. This latest chapter is near 6000-words long! The epilogue, though? It SHOULD be back to the 3000-word range, if not shorter. We'll see how that goes....

We're supposed to get a nasty snow storm again today, so I may be staying snuggled under blankets all day. Hopefully that also means I'll get at least the rough draft of the epilogue done while I'm getting snowed in. My original goal was to have the full story done within two weeks of Christmas so it didn't seem dragged out; bleeding into Valentine's Day. That clearly didn't happen, so I then aimed for January 24th so it would have taken me exactly a month to write an eight-chapter story. Yet another swing and miss. So NOW my deadline - or, as one of my professors once called it, the Drop-Dead line - is this Thursday. I WILL have this story done before the close of January.

I'm still debating if I want to count WH as my "monthly new story update" for my New Year's Resolution, or if I want to see if I can also sneak in a short of some kind. We'll see what I have time for.

Speaking of time and resolutions, I finally cracked open my first book of the year. I've been reading fanfics throughout the month, but this is the first professionally written piece I've read in about 3 months.... Which is why I started doing these annual challenges in the first place. Granted, the real boot to the bottom was a few years back when I literally read ONE BOOK all year long. How could I want to aspire to become an author if I won't even read books?

I know it's a fairly universally followed rule that writers should also be avid readers, and, frankly, I probably still don't read as frequently as most authors. I know the reason behind this "rule" is because the best way to improve your own work is to study the work of others. Figure out what you like, and learn how to incorporate it in to your own style. Figure out what doesn't work, and learn how to avoid those pitfalls in your own writing. See what's popular. Admire the style and research poured onto the page by other writers. In the more literal sense, there's also writing How-To books that help sharpen skills and give motivation. Then there's the pure escapism. If you're stuck behind Writer's Block, what better way to become re-inspired than to dive into someone else's story within that genre? You let your mind wander, and something in the story could spark what you want to do with your own.

There are TONS of reasons why writers should also make sure to be readers.

But the one that I hold as the top-tier reason?

How could I expect others to read my works if I'm not reading the works of others? It's a karma thing. A full-circle thing. A balance of the scales thing. A professional courtesy thing.

I don't want to be a hypocrite, living by "do as I say; not as I do." I don't want to ask people to put aside their precious time in order to read my works if I won't extend the same basic courtesy towards others. Who am I? To think my time is too restricted and invaluable to dedicate to reading, but believe your time isn't at least as rare? No! If you can take the time to read my stuff, I can do a least one new story a month.

And I have grown to read roughly a story a month, plus whatever I read with fanfiction. Maybe one day I'll re-structure my freetime, or learn to read fast enough, to be able to read two books a month. Perhaps, one day, when I'm sitting in retirement or something, I'll make it to a book a week, or even two a week. I know people who read roughly 100 books a year! I don't know if I'll ever get to that point, but it truly is inspiring to aim for that. It's also uplifting to know there are still people who consume so much written word. Gives us writers hope that maybe our story could find its way onto someone's reading list.

Point being, I finally got around to reading yesterday. I had to do SOMETHING productive if I was avoiding writing. The story I started up was a Christmas gift from the hubby: Ernest Cline's second novel "Armada." Just reading the book description reminds me of "Ender's Game," so let's see how Cline puts his own twist on the concept.
Zack Lightman has never much cared for reality. He vastly prefers the countless science-fiction movies, books, and videogames he's spent his life consuming. And too often, he catches himself wishing that some fantastic, impossible, world-altering event could arrive to whisk him off on a grand spacefaring adventure.

So when he sees the flying saucer, he's sure his years of escapism have finally tipped over to psychosis.

Especially because the alien ship he's staring at is straight out of his favorite videogame, a flight simulator called
Armada--in which gamers just happen to be protecting Earth from alien invaders.

As impossible as it seems, what Zack's seeing is all too real. And it's just the first in a blur of revelations that will force him to question everything he thought he knew about Earth's history, its future, even his own life--and to play the hero for real, with humanity's fate in the balance.

But even through the terror and exhilaration, he can't help thinking: Doesn't something about this scenario feel a little bit like... well... fiction?

At once reinventing and paying homage to science-fiction classics as only Ernest Cline can, Armada is a rollicking, surprising thriller, a coming-of-age adventure, and an alien invasion tale like nothing you've ever read before.
Perhaps "Ender's Game" is one of the "science-fiction classics" being referred to.... Basically, I'm feeling like "Armada" is what "Pixels" should have been....

I only took the time to read the first chapter, but I have noticed a pattern already in Cline's writing.
  1. He likes to write in first person. I get it; I do too. I switch it up to 3rd with some stories, but I largely write in 1st. I enjoy it, and didn't realize it got so much hate until I had reviews for “Peeping Tomcat” telling me I changed their mind about 1st person POV. Maybe it's just fanfiction written in 1st that gets the hate????
  2. Both of his main characters are males during their senior year of high school when they get the Call to Action. In "Ready Player One" his main character Wade realized where the first key to The Contest was hidden while he was sitting in class his senior year. In fact, I think it was January of his senior year. In "Armada" the main character Zack notices the flying saucer while he's daydreaming in class. He's 2 months from graduation, so... April of his senior year?
    • I don't know if this means something significant happened to Cline during his senior year of high school, which is why this timeframe is the catalystic point in both books, or if he just figured "this way they're technically teenagers, but they'll have adult-like freedom within the timeframe of the book."
  3. Both main characters have a strong connection to their deceased father. Wade was given that first name because his father liked the idea of his son having alliteration in his name, like the best comic book characters. Wade also was really into 80s culture, like his father. Granted, that was because of The Contest, and he never actually knew his father, who died during a power outage riot. Zack did know his father, and they bonded over Sci-Fi and... 80s culture. Zack's father also had mental health problems, which Zack seems to have inherited.
    • Maybe Cline is working out his own father issues within these books? An homage to the man, perhaps? It seems significant that he has this trend between both main characters.
  4. Cline has a thing for the 1980's. I mean, I just said that 80s pop-culture is present in both books. Now, I've only read the first chapter of "Armada," so I don't know if the 80s themes are going to run nearly as deep as they did in "Ready Player One" - which was basically a love letter to the 80s - but the theme is still there again.
    • Cline was born in 1972, which meant he was a teenager during the 80s, so he may just be writing what he knows - how to be a teen surrounded by 80s pop culture - while still trying to be futuristic, hence all the throw-back references.
I wonder what the trends are in my writing. I know one of them is that I get VERY introspective with my characters, but I'm now curious if I have more specific trends, such as Cline's affinity towards the 80s, males close to graduating high school, or specifically pointed out connections between the protagonist and his father....

If you know of any oddly specific tropes or trends I include in my writing, feel free to point it/them out in the comments below. In the meantime, I'll see what other fun parallels Cline has in both stories.

I'll also be sure to have "Woven Heartstrings" finished up by the end of the week so you can see the conclusion of that next week. February is the start of me getting serious with my finishing the first draft of "One and the Same." As is, I don't know if I'll have it polished up enough for me to start publishing chapters by the end of March. Shame; I wanted to have it follow the same timeframe as "Peeping Tomcat". We'll have to see how everything goes.
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Tuesday, January 22, 2019

"Woven Heartstrings" Getting Lots of Love

I hope everyone has been warm and safe this winter. There have been some nasty storms coming through the US this past week or so. Luckily, things turned out fairly nice for us on the upper East Coast. Not nearly as much as we were supposed to get, and it is so pretty.
 
Outside my front door.
Look at that sunrise.
  Outside my garage.
The parking lot has been
really well maintained.
When the storm hit on Sunday I was already off of work, but it still felt like a snow day for me. Hubby had to work until 4, so I had the house to myself; snuggled inside under two thick blankets.

I had most of the day to write or read or clean or play video games. I could just do whatever I wanted.

Since I slacked off and didn't write anything down on my calendar for Sunday - not that it matters because there's barely any space for Sunday in my planner - I can't really say what it was that I actually did.

All I know is that it kept FOREVER to finish off my latest chapter of "Woven Heartstrings." I don't know what it was, but I just kept avoiding that chapter. I would write for about 20min, and then I'd spend an hour on Tumblr, or I would make myself an elaborate meal, or I would read someone else's fanfic, or I would decide "Ya know? RIGHT NOW is the perfect time to finally get into 'Steven Universe'."

I'm like 11 episodes in now; just met Opal.

For the life of me, I couldn't stay focused on the chapter. I knew what I wanted to do. I knew what I wanted to write. I had detailed notes. I am at the home-stretch with my story now. This latest chapter was actually the reason behind the cover image, even if the original intention of the cover image changed. I even had it about 2/5th of the way written by Saturday. I just needed to write the second half+ of the chapter.

Even with all of that, it kept me pretty much the entire day to finish. I don't think I posted until like 9 or 10 at night.

Whatever it was that held me back, this chapter was still one of the fastest turn-arounds I've ever written.
  • December 24th, I posted the first chapter of "Woven Heartstrings"
  • January 1st, after an eight-day wait, which was largely due to celebrating the holidays, the second chapter went up.
  • January 6th, the third chapter was posted; it kept me five days that time.
  • January 12th, after six days of working on it, I posted the fourth chapter.
  • January 17th saw chapter five, after going back to a five-day turn around.
  • And then there's January 20th being the publishing date of chapter six. Making it only a three-day turn-around between postings!
I'm getting faster.... I'm also not focusing on anything but writing for the most part, so I'm definitely not going to be able to sustain this. Still, I want to push through the last chapter and epilogue of this story as fast as I can. It's already close to a month since this Christmas story first posted. Not too bad if said month was December and the last chapter was around Christmas. It's kind of pathetic, though, to have a Christmas-themed story extend so far into January.

But I'm refusing to take down my tree until I'm done. It helps keep me in the Christmas spirit...

On the plus side, yesterday was the first zero-day in 10 days!

I just needed a break. I'm still dumbfounded by Taurus Pixie's ability to write and post A NEW CHAPTER EVERY DAY for twelve solid days straight when she wrote "Twelve Days of Chatmas." I'm exhausted with a three-day turn-around!

If you'd like to read the fruits of my labor, you can check out the chapters in their normal locations.
"Chapter 5: Both of Us"
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"Chapter 6: Bonded"
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I am pleasantly surprised by the reception of this story. I'm already up to 4,072 hits, 87 follows, 54 faves, and 25 reviews on FanFiction. Over on AO3, I have 1,560 views, 15 bookmarks, 142 kudos! - of which 75 are from guests - and 10 comments.

What really shocked me was how many notes I have on Tumblr for the latest chapter's announcement.
  • Chapter 1 announcement; announcement of the new story "Woven Heartstrings"
    • 2 notes. Understandable, it was over the holiday... and both notes were Pixie: one liking and one reblogging with a comment.
  • Chapter 2 announcement
    • 7 notes. I was actually impressed to get that many after a week's wait for the next chapter, and the fact that it was past Christmas
  • Chapter 3 announcement
    • 8 notes; the slight increase included ChibiSunnie commenting and me responding
  • Chapter 4 announcement
    • Jumped up to 16 notes! One of which was my first reblog outside of Pixie.
  • Chapter 5 announcement
    • Back down to 8 notes, but one was a new reblog. A separate person than Pixie or the person who reblogged chapter 4.
  • Chapter 6 announcement
    • We're back up to 15 notes. Two of which were reblogs.
The real killer thing is that virtually no one who liked a previous chapter's promotional post liked any subsequent ones. I'm not sure how I should feel about that....

All in all, there were 42 different people liking and/or reblogging my story update announcements this month. The most consistent fans are ssarielss, who only missed the chapter 4 update, and keemikoko, who liked the promos for chapters 2, 3, and 4. The blog fanfictionrecommendations-com has liked the posts for chapters 5 and 6, but without reblogging them I'm not sure if that really helps me.... They seem to have themed weeks and only share within that theme, so perhaps they're just stockpiling for when Miraculous Ladybug gets their week???? We'll see. Either way, the blog looks very professionally designed and maintained, so that's pretty awesome. If you need a good recommendation, you should give them a check. Let me know if you find any good ones.

By the way, speaking of reception of this story, I have to say I've been getting such sweet reviews for this thing. One of the best reviews came from my freak-out in the closing Author's Notes of the latest chapter.

Fair Warning: Since This Comment Is In Response To Closing A/Ns, There Are Spoilers To The Chapter.
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This chapter was tricky. I knew almost from the get-go that I wanted Adrien to use his new crocheting skills to make a scarf for his father, which is why the candy-cane-striped scarf is part of the cover illustration. I also felt that Nathalie and the Gorilla needed scarves as well. The trick, though, was I don't want to give Gabe and Nathalie too much sympathy. I don't want to make people think I'm okay with their small acts of affection making up for all the neglect and endangerment thrown at Adrien. At the same time though, ADRIEN is a very forgiving kid still, and would GLADLY forgive both of them with just the tiniest bit of affection. All he wants is to be loved, and he'll take it where he can get it. So, I wanted Adrien to feel authentic, but please know that by NO MEANS am I condoning anything Gabriel and Nathalie are doing.
To which I received this response:
Guest: Me thinks you worry too much. We know that a character's voice is not the author's voice. An author's voice doesn't really belong in a fic - it sounds too preachy.

It was authentic and it did not feel like condoning evil. No need to explain it.
So, thank you, Guest, whoever you are. I think part of my avoiding-writing-the-chapter problem was because I was over-thinking. I appreciate the love.
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ALRIGHT! SPOILERS ARE DONE NOW!
Another review of note that I received was for chapter 4:
Nkemmer777: In your second paragraph of this chapter it’s frigid not “frigged”. Just letting you know! Love this so far!
I actually laughed so hard when I saw that review. I KNEW that word didn't look right, but I didn't get the red spell check squiggle, so I just thought I was being silly. Once it was pointed out that I was indeed right - I had used the wrong word - I got a giggle over my whoopsie, and another over my accidentally having Tikki "curse" in the beginning of that chapter.

I appreciate that my readers feel comfortable enough to be able to point things like that out to me so I could polish up my stories a bit more.

Naturally, I fixed my typo, and thanked Nkemmer777 for her help. She then followed up with a thanks for the shout-out and an offer to beta-read for me. I didn't take her up on her offer since I'm nearly done with WH, but we did get to chatting, and I'm probably going to have her beta-read for "One and the Same" once I have the darn draft finished!

In the meantime, I offered to beta-read for her instead. She's working on a one-shot right now, and she has one in-progress story up on FFN. Instead of writing or doing anything productive for my own stories yesterday, I went ahead and beta-read her stories. I just need to get my notes to her... so guess what I'm doing once I'm done here.

She has really cute concepts, and I can see the fluffy goodness potential. I'm excited to see how each story concludes. Although, I'm not entirely sure how the one story is going to be just a one-shot. It has so much to tell. Then again, I do have a 12,000 word one-shot for "Hey, Arnold!" so it's possible she will just do one really long one-shot like that.

Anyway, feel free to check out her profile and see the start of an interesting story.

In the meantime, I should probably get my notes to her, and get started on the penultimate chapter to WH.... or, rather, final chapter since the last "chapter" is a brief epilogue....

Either way... TO WRITING!
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I actually have my blue-framed glasses on today too....

Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Stuck in a Winter Wonderland

This week was.... um.... interesting. The Northeast of the US got hit by "Winter storm/blizzard Stella" last week. The majority of it came down last Tuesday, cancelling my writer's group meeting. It also meant I had all day inside. A day where I could get away with not doing laundry or other errands because I was snowed in. It wasn't my fault. I wasn't being lazy. I just had no choice. A guilt-free day to ignore adulthood.

As Judy Reeves wrote in "A Writer's Book of Days":
Snowbound
(or The Serendipitous Effects of Bad Weather on a Good Writer)

There's six feet of new snow, and outside your window a gauzy shroud of white obliterates any horizon....

Let's just say that, for whatever reason, and through forces outside your control, you're homebound for the day. Consider this a gift. You've been given a writing day, free and clear.

This is a day for snugging in. Think of words like
warm, fuzzy, cozy. Brew up some cocoa; hot, spiced tea; coffee with warmed milk. A few cookies or some buttered toast won't go astray. Build a crackling fire or, lacking a fireplace, encircle your nest with candles. Get your notebook, your favorite pen, and settle in.

Warm up with a five-minute writing... then maybe a ten-minute writing.... Refresh your coffee or tea, give the fire a poke, and encamp yourself again. Release all constraints of time and begin another writing session. Continue writing one of the pieces you've already begun, or start fresh.... Instead of stopping after fifteen or twenty minutes, keep going. When you come to what might be a stopping place, don't mark a period on the page but instead put a comma and keep writing. Or begin again with a connector such as
then or however or instead of or but and allow the pen to begin its meanderings anew. Write as long as you want. Let this be a leisurely session; there's no schedule to keep, nothing to do instead of write.
Well, we only had about three feet of snow; not six. Maybe that's why I didn't spend the day writing. I spent it cleaning the apartment. Still a productive day, right? I did do a lot of reading, and I did write for at least 15minutes in the evening as I FINALLY got around to responding as Trish over on the X-Future boards. Only kept me like three months....

Not the most inspiring way to use a snowday. Hubby and I watched movies, snuggled warmly in the living room. I did some cleaning. I watched him play more "Breath of the Wild." I did some reading. I finally got around to filling out the official character sheet for Jynna. I still need to officially write up her backstory so that Hubby can approve, and then I can write that out on her character sheet as well.

Then, Wednesday, I had the fun of doing this for most of my morning:
Fun, right?

More cleaning commenced inside once I was done unburying myself, my work, and my in-laws. No reading was done, but I did get another prompt finished. Poor Lia has been off on the sidelines for a while. I've written about the yet-to-be-fully-formed Elymoxa the Gnome. I've had two stories to help me get into character with Jynna. Amara re-emerged for a short. I even had the umph to write Trish's part on the X-Future boards. Willow I've had some posts on the boards before the game died off. Lia? She's been kind of quiet, but she piped up a bit on Wednesday. That was exciting.

It was also the last thing I wrote for the week.... From Thursday on it was all about playing catch-up, on work, on the last of the remaining chores, on the errands I couldn't do in the snow, etc.

I'm not sure what's up with me this winter. I just don't have the drive and NEED to write like I did last year. I'm not entirely sure how to fix that, either, which is the truly sad thing. My exercising and waistline have also fallen to the wayside, if that is any indicator. Something about winter, even a mild one like we had - minus last week's storm, always makes me want to hibernate on the couch.

Now that it's officially spring, maybe I can get myself back on track. To try to start the trend, I actually took the time to type up a couple more of my writing prompts. I'm now up to January 7th.
Knives from the Scott Pilgrim comic books
by Bryan Lee O'Malley
Progress is progress, I guess. At least writing wise I'm up to January 18th. Not much better, but still... Hubby's going to have to go "full grounding" and send me to our room as well, not just swipe my computer. I still don't seem to be getting anywhere that way.

Well, while I'm trying to get my footing again, here are my January 6th and 7th writing prompt works:

"Quick Thoughts on Time Travel"
This one is super short at only 562 words. Not at all what I was intending when I read the prompt, but I "trusted the pen" and ended up with a micro-essay, as it were.

"Nature Can Bite Me"
An actual narrative, but this one is still only 829 words. I finally have another flash to send to Ronoxym. We'll just ignore that I wrote it back on February 9th.... Doing so well on those writing New Years Resolutions, guys!